COMMUNICATION IN THE BIOLOGICAL SCIENCES
Department of Biology

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TITLE

"Recombinant Human Antithrombin III"

Comment: This does not tell the reader much about the paper.

Better: "Expression of Biologically Active Human Antithrombin III by Recombinant Baculovirus in Spodoptera frugiperda Cells"
 

EXAMPLE 2:

"On the Discovery of a Useful New Laboratory Research Method for Isolating and Purifying the Lactose-degrading Enzyme B-galactosidase from the Economically Important, Yogurt-producing Bacterial Species Lactobacillus bulgaricus”

Comment: This needs streamlining

Better: "A New Method for Isolating and Purifying B-galactosidase from Lactobacillus bulgaricus”

EXAMPLE 3:

“Studies on a Snake”

Comment: Too brief. What snake? Where? What kinds of studies?

Better: “The Thermal Ecology of a Population of Timber Rattlesnakes (Crotalus horridus) on Brady’s Bluff, Wisconsin”

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