COMMUNICATION IN THE BIOLOGICAL SCIENCES
Department of Biology


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A Short Answer Question

Your roommate decides to try his hand at home-brewing beer. He adds baker's yeast, malt, hops, and sugar into a gallon of water. He then puts this mix into a gallon bucket without a lid. You wait to see if he will cover the bucket, but he leaves the mixture exposed to the air. "You know you'll never get any alcohol or carbonation produced like that," you advise your roommate.

"What do you mean?" He replies. "I've got the right proportions of yeast and sugar. It should start fermenting any time now."Help your roommate, and explain why he will not get enough fermentation to produce alcohol and carbonation.

A Good Answer

Yeast are facultatively anaerobic which means that they perform fermentation only under anaerobic conditions. In the presence of O2, the yeast will perform aerobic metabolism. The roommate has left the bucket open to the air, so the yeast will have access to a continuous supply of O2.  With O2, the yeast will replenish their NAD+ through electron transport in the mitochondria. Alcohol and CO2 (which produces carbonation) are produced by the fermentation pathway which occurs significantly only in the absence of O2.
 
 

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A Bad Answer

Yeast are facultatively anaerobic which means that they perform fermentation only under anaerobic conditions. Certain bacteria are obligately anaerobic and can exist only in O2-free circumstances. In contrast, many organisms can only survive in aerobic conditions. Humans need O2 to survive, but their cells can utilize fermentation when O2 levels are low. In the presence of O2, the yeast will perform aerobic metabolism. The roommate has left the bucket open to the air, so the yeast will have access to a continuous supply of O2. With O2, the yeast will replenish their NAD+ through electron transport in the mitochondria. In the mitochondria, even more NAD+ are converted to NADH by the TCA cycle. However, all these NADH, including those from glycolysis, will be converted back to NAD+ when they donate their electrons to the electron transport chain. The electron transport chain pumps H+ across the mitochondrial inner membrane to create a H+ gradient. This proton gradient is then used to make ATP energy. Because yeast only produce alcohol and CO2 (which produces carbonation) through the fermentation pathway, the presence of O2 will prevent any build up of either alcohol or CO2.

 What Makes This a Good Answer
  • Irrelevant information is left out. 
  • The key points are clearly stated in the first two sentences. 
 What Makes This a Bad Answer
  • All of the highlighted information is extraneous. The question is about yeast only and fermentation only. 

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  • Much of the pertinent information is buried between two large sections of irrelevant information. 
A Good Answer

Yeast are facultatively anaerobic which means that they perform fermentation only under anaerobic conditions. In the presence of O2, the yeast will perform aerobic metabolism. The roommate has left the bucket open to the air, so the yeast will have access to a continuous supply of O2.  With O2, the yeast will replenish their NAD+ through electron transport in the mitochondria. Alcohol and CO2 (which produces carbonation) are produced by the fermentation pathway which occurs significantly only in the absence of O2.

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 A Bad Answer

Yeast can choose between using oxygen and not using oxygen. They will ferment stuff (1) only when there is not enough oxygen around. In the presence of O2, the yeast want to use the oxygen (2), so they do. The roommate has left the bucket open to the air, so the yeast will have access to a continuous supply of O2.  With O2, the yeast will do what they need to do without making alcohol and carbonation. Alcohol and carbonation are produced by the pathway that does not require O2, and this obviously only occurs significantly in the absence of O2.

What Makes This a Good Answer
  • The appropriate technical terms (highlighted) are used when pertinent.  
 What Makes This a Bad Answer
  • A lack of scientific terms makes the answer less clear. 

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  • Use of slang. 

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  • Teleology and anthropomorphism. 
A Good Answer

Yeast are facultatively anaerobic which means that they perform fermentation only under anaerobic conditions. In the presence of O2, the yeast will perform aerobic metabolism. The roommate has left the bucket open to the air, so the yeast will have access to a continuous supply of O2. With O2, the yeast will replenish their NAD+ through electron transport in the mitochondria. Alcohol and CO2 (which produces carbonation) are produced by the fermentation pathway which occurs significantly only in the absence of O2.

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A Bad Answer

Yeast are facultatively anaerobic which means that they perform fermentation only under anaerobic conditions. In the presence of O2, the yeast will perform aerobic metabolism.  With O2, the yeast will replenish their NAD+ through electron transport in the mitochondria. Alcohol and CO2 (which produces carbonation) are produced by the fermentation pathway which occurs significantly only in the absence of O2.

What Makes This a Good Answer

Cause and effect relationships are made obvious by the sentence. 

What Makes This a Bad Answer

Without the sentence about the bucket, the answer does not attempt to solve the problem outlined by the question. Without this sentence, you would have explained facultative anaerobic metabolism, but would not have demonstrated that you could use this knowledge in a practical setting to answer the question.

A Good Answer

Yeast are facultatively anaerobic which means that they perform fermentation only under anaerobic conditions. In the presence of O2, the yeast will perform aerobic metabolism. The roommate has left the bucket open to the air, so the yeast will have access to a continuous supply of O2.  With O2, the yeast will replenish their NAD+ through electron transport in the mitochondria. Alcohol and CO2 (which produces carbonation) are produced by the fermentation pathway which occurs significantly only in the absence of O2.
 
 

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A Bad Answer

Yeast are facultatively anaerobic which means that they perform fermentation only under anaerobic conditions. Certain bacteria are obligately anaerobic and can exist only in O2-free circumstances. In contrast, many organisms can only survive in aerobic conditions. Humans need O2 to survive, but their cells can utilize fermentation when O2 levels are low.

What Makes This a Good Answer

It addresses the question.

What Makes This a Bad Answer

It addresses a different question. 

The answer above could be considered a good answer to a question which asks you to compare different organisms that use different types of metabolism. However, it is a poor answer to the question that was asked.

A Good Answer

Yeast are facultatively anaerobic which means that they perform fermentation only under anaerobic conditions. In the presence of O2, the yeast will perform aerobic metabolism. The roommate has left the bucket open to the air, so the yeast will have access to a continuous supply of O2. With O2, the yeast will replenish their NAD+ through electron transport in the mitochondria. Yeast perform the following reaction only in anaerobic conditions.

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 A Bad Answer

What Makes This a Good Answer
  • It uses a diagram to convey information. 

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  • There is adequate text to address the question
 What Makes This a Bad Answer
  • There is only a diagram without any explanation of how it relates to the question. 

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  • The instructor is left wondering if you know how this relates to the question.  

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